The Official Writing Challenge
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Very informative. I like how you wove the inner, private war with the events of the WWII.
I like how you used events in day-by-day life to show the life of a young girl living in that time of history. Keep up the good work!
This was good. They should print it in the Cocoa newspaper. Nice job!
You made this really interesting with the personal conflict along with the war. Fantastic writing!
I love the way you told this story - I enjoyed walking along with your MC through the streets of Cocoa, and through the conflicts in her mind. Wonderful.
Your words flow beautifully. You made the MC come to life. I enjoy your type of storytelling. I also like the footnote.
Nicely done. This story had a quiet calm feeling to it.
What s nice town.I felt like I was there! Thanks!
War within, war around. Jumped around a lot in subject and thoughts which added to the conflict. Well told from a child's perspective opening the mind of adults as well to our own conflict. Well done!

Reads as if it were a true story in detailing the area, times, and thoughts.

God bless and keep writing.