The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
Well done. Some valuable lessons to be learned toay from this 'Historical' account. A good retelling of this well-known and loved story of true forgiveness.
05/12/07
Very insightful. A very good retelling of a classic (or should I say THE classic) story, but it could use a little work. Just to clean it up a bit and make it tighter. I don't think it flowed very well.
I like the way you gave Peter a voice and told his story through conversation.
05/14/07
A great first-person account through Peter's eyes!
05/15/07
Good ole Peter! He was so multi-dimensional that I can't imagine the story of the gospel without him being in it. You did a great job!
05/15/07
Cool! You did a great job and I loved the voice. It flowed like a conversation and felt that way. Very good!!
05/15/07
Great title! I enjoyed your voice in this piece. I would love to see the phrasing tightened up a bit, but you definitely got your message across!
05/17/07
Thanks for sharing this story with a new freshness...your gift for writing shines!