The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
God does move in mysterious ways but I've never heard of Him moving mesmerizoricly until tonight. :)
A good desciption of the changing of a heart by God; one that all who come to Him share.
05/11/07
Interesting revival tale...I could feel the dryness of her soul before her change. I was confused a little by "mesmerizoricly" (typo?) and some dialectal apostrophe use that seemed out of place. The transformation & rejoicing was conveyed well, though. Nice effort!
I enjoyed the paragraph that ended "until..."
and then
"the hand of God reached down and...".
That was powerful! Very nice writing.