The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
I really felt the anxiety with your character! Good job!
Your character seems to be experiencing Obessive Compulsive disorder. Interesting concept!!
I don't understand much about this type of phobia, but I did understand that God is the answer. Good job.
05/07/07
Excellent depiction of OCD. The only suggestion I have is minor, I think it was the second paragraph. It seemed a little slow, especially since there is so much great visualization throughout your story. Great job!
05/19/07
A little surprised at the 8th paragraph; "just another ******** day in paradise. More like shocked than surprised I guess. Otherwise, a unique story of compulsive phobia.