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I do so believe in God watching over His own in the form of heavenly angels - your testimony witnesses to this and encourages my belief - thank-you for sharing this wonderful story and fleshing out one of the truths found in the book of Hebrews.
05/03/07
How wonderful - great detail and message (this one would have worked for this week too!). This whole scene came to life. God is good!
05/03/07
Very powerful and inspirational piece. Beautifully told. What a wonderful story to have in your family history - a great legacy!
05/07/07
Oh, cool! Family stories like this are real treasures, and this was a good read.
This gave me chills. Love the message, and it's well written, too.
05/07/07
Great family history. It's so awesome to see the way God works -- great inspirational story.
Very good article about ministering angels. Also about learning to heed God's warning.
05/08/07
I really connected with this piece, probably because the story reminds me of my own once-wayward son, who is the subject of my own inspirational entry this week. I enjoyed your writing style and felt every pain and every joy along with Reinder's mother. Well done. Cheri
05/08/07
I love angel stories! And this one didn't disappoint! Very well written, short and to the point. Aren't we blessed that He looks out for us? ^_^
What a lovely story to pass down from generation to generation. And you did a beautiful job presenting it couched in the loving way that you did. Very nice job of writing!
05/08/07
This would be a good 1 for "Angels on Earth" magazine.
05/10/07
Myrna,
Sorry for my late comment, but I had to add my two cents. I loved the ending and the young man's willingness to listen to an elder, even though he was a (I like to hold out hope for all) PRE-CHRISTIAN. Thanks for sharing this one. Don
05/10/07
I agree with Molina,
I sold a story a year ago to Angels on Earth("The Hungry Dragonfly") Your's would be a great one to send to them.
Don