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I love your descriptions of the trees lined up along the dry riverbed. It fits the scripture well.
05/08/07
Your 4th paragraph is extremely powerful! Good job!
Great message! The transition between the story of your trip and talking about trust seemed abrupt to me, but otherwise a great article.
Great devotional. Make me like a tree, Lord. Yes.
This is one of my favorite insights about planting ourselves by the living waters. I truly enjoyed your allegory and find it refreshing : ) Thank-you for sharing and helping to remind me of this spiritual truth.
05/09/07
Great description - I was right there with you on that tour. I also felt the transition was a bit abrupt, but I loved BOTH parts of this lovely piece.