The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the analogy between the child being "healed" by the touch of his mother and the healing power of God.
The last line tied it all together with the RED of the cape. Excellent writing and POV.
I enjoyed this heart-warming, well-told story.
Wonderful! His Powerful Touch came through your writing. Thanks.
Love that Superman hero! A charming story well told. Good job.
Just beautiful! Left me sighing with satisfaction. Congratulations on your win and on a job well done! Blessings, Cheri
Way to go Lisa!!!! I was so happy to see you made first place and into another book!! Woo hoo!
Congrats and a wonderful entry!
Very nicely told and easy to identify with. There are many layers to this simple story to enjoy and touch the heart. Congratulations on your win!
Excellent story, timeless. I almost wish you hadn't given the year--I truly think it works anytime, anywhere.

Loved the first line.

Great, great job. Congrats on your well-deserved placement.
A delightful story, full of real emotions and ending on a high note of hope. A worthy winner. yeggy
WOW! This touched me! Congratulations on a well-deserved 1st place!
Congratulations on first place. The judges were right-on! This is absolutely delightful--goes in my favorites folder. Verna
Very good article. No wonder it was a winner. Inspirational.