The Official Writing Challenge
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I think I finally understand your pov here. I feel like the poem would stand better alone. The beginning article confused me a little. Maybe it was too deep for me. But the poem is very good and easily can hold its own alone. Good job.
05/08/07
Lots and lots of wonderful stuff here, but the thing that touched me most was the phrase "whether or not the mountain moves..." It's like the three men in the fiery furnace, who said "even if he does not..." Lord, give me that unconditional faith!

Was also tickled by your use of "amity." I have done my job.
05/10/07
Just full of things to ponder! Feels like one of those pieces I will "get" more and more each time I read it.