The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/07
I've added this to my favorites! This poem has such a natural flow and rhythm without being structured. It flowed off my "tongue" as I read, and I was drawn into your heart with you poetic words. Applause!
05/08/07
Wow! I really like this profound and poetic piece! I need to read it again and again to savor every phrase! There are some deep messages in this very well-written poem. Great job! :)
I love the worshipful attitude and flow of this piece. The second stanza is especially meaningful.
05/10/07
This is a wonderful love song to the Father. It blessed my heart. Thanks, Cheri