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Cute story and a perfect title for your story. It ties in very easily to God's providence and perfect timing.
05/09/07
Wow! What a job you had trying to effectively balance 100 female and only 15 male voices! :)

I especially liked your title and also the clever line, "The night started out on a good note, literally"! However, in the second paragraph, where you have "outdoor sing out at the Garden and Home Center," I would "scratch" the repetetive-sounding "out." I think it would read more smoothly as "outdoor sing at the Garden and Home Center."

I loved what happened while you sang "Oh, Holy Night"! That had to be divinely orchestrated timing! How perfect! Thank you for sharing this sweet story!
05/09/07
Thank you for sharing this delightful story as a way of revealing how God works in every area of our lives. We may be a little off key, but His timing is perfect!
05/10/07
A very nice devotional. Written well and finished with a smile of celestial satisfaction. I enjoyed this light hearted and touching entry...and a great title. Nicely done.