The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
Very creative! You wrote a clever little poem with a great big message! So often the greatest lessons in life can be learned from the humblest of teachers, the little children. Very nice! Good job! Cheri
05/04/07
From the mouths of babes ... Well done! Good meter, great message.
This is so lovely. Being a Grandma, too, I thoroughly enjoyed the poem. And very well written.
05/09/07
This is precious, and makes me long for grandchildren of my own!
Wonderful poem. So true. Being a grandmother, I can relate to this. Good work.
In your beautiful poem you wrote "Now when I give my gifts to God, I carefully must choose The best of all things that I have For Him to freely use"
You have done that with this piece, thank-you for sharing this message.
05/09/07
Very, very sweet and easy to relate to. Excellent message. Thanks for sharing this!
05/09/07
I love this! It makes me want to go and hug my Nanny (grandmother). I love the little story examples and especially the rhyming meter. Very nicely done here!
05/09/07
Wonderful inpiration!
"Mine are the brightest of them all—" Might have to take issue with you on this! Hee Hee!