The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/05
Amen, sister, amen!!

Mary N
GREAT IS "HIS" FAITHFULNESS! What a faith-builder!
04/25/05
A thanksgiving miracle fueled by faith. Lovely.
04/26/05
Wonderful, well written, slice of life story. I can fully identify with being the female bread winner. Watch out for redundancies: 'I enquired' and 'He asked sarcastically' are understood by the reader because they are already in the tone or words of your dialogue. Sentences like ‘Bills don’t take a break in December, even if contract companies do.' are great because they are experiences that we can all identify with.

04/26/05
Moving! Love to hear how God answers prayer!
04/27/05
This was wonderfully heartwarming. I agree wtih Maxx - it's awesome to see prayers answered. It is also awesome to be the one whom God provides for in answer to their faith.
04/28/05
So very heartwarming and touching. God is certainly in tune to our needs and blesses us generously. :)
04/28/05
He always comes through, and I think He loves to do it at the last minute. Nicely done Cori!