The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
Very cute, and I think you succeeded in capturing the thoughts and feelings of the first encounter.
Excellent! Many will relate to this no matter what the age is. Well done. Totally understood this story.
04/28/07
Very creative. You captured his emotions very well. Nice writing.
04/30/07
Definitely captured the emotions of the what if's of a possible romance. My palms were sweating just from relating! Well done.
Cute nervous pep talk. God gives us courage. It's a good thing he stepped in here. Good story.