The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
This plot is too deep for only 750 words! Parts were slightly confusing but it definitely made me want to know more of their story. I'd love to see this expanded into a longer short story :-) Nice job.
04/26/07
You carried the emotion of his love very well. I think that the limited length caused your piece to suffer some, even though you only had one setting, but I'd definitely recommend turning this into something longer and then try and get a magazine to publish it.
05/01/07
I enjoyed this. Engaging title with a story that really delivered. The dialogue was well written and the message in this context still resonates. How amazing, mysterious and eternal is our Saviour's love...
Wonderful analogy. Jesus is there to redeem and love us in spite of our failures.