The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/07
What a great take on romance! It had a great humorous touch but made me think too. That's quite a love to wait that long! Nice pace, flow, dialogue. Very well done!
Hehe, cute!
04/30/07
Creative touch to a favorite story! Enjoyed reading this from the title to the end!
04/30/07
Lots of fun - I can tell you enjoyed writing this one. A neat take on a familiar story.
04/30/07
Really cute title, and I liked the modernization of the language.

Some punctuation problems in a few places.

You made these people very down-to-earth and likeable...good job.