The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes -that definately wasn't just a coincidence!
Great piece. Fun to read. Very well done. Good job.
Love found at Applebees! Great! I think one part where she was talking to herself was in quotes and the next in italics, I'm not sure if that is the way to do it, I'm definitely not strong in grammar. This was a neat read and kept the mystery for sure!
This was a fun story--well plotted!
I love the the way this wrong number turned out right! Well Done!
This made me smile more than once - with your writing style, I could see it all happening and feel the MC's thoughts and emotions - possiblly because we've all been there at one time or another.

I like the way you brought it to a conclusion as well - desert first and then dinner - interesting and possilbly even profound : )
So the first thing I thought about when I saw the title was the old game that was popular when I was a youngster -- now I'm showing my age!

I loved how this romance developed! I figured it was a case of mistaken identity, but couldn't wait to see how it turned out.

I met my husband on a blind date -- we've been married now for 23 years.

Nice work, Cheri
This is a delightful, fun read. I would have rather not known that he'd taken out the other woman. It's kind of a negative in an otherwise very positive, upbeat story. But I really enjoyed it. A very 'playful,'cheerful, and optimistic story. Good writing! Leaves the reader with a good feeling!
So creative - and wonderful dialogue. Enjoyed this very much!
cute approach to romance. Well, they've met, now I want to hear more. Good job.
Love the mystery date! Guess Dave didn't make a mistake after all. I wish there'd been a little bit more at the end instead of her rushing around to get ready, but that's just me, I think. I loved the end best of all. Great job! ^_^
Wow, Myrna! What can I say, but this is wonderful! Congratulations on your fine writing! : )
I'm so glad you placed in EC! This was a clever, fun story to read, and I did my best as a judge to see that it got the recognition it deserved.
Cute story! Congrats on your win.
I guess for a goofy moment I forgot the genre was romance, since the first thing I thought was he would get her out of the house and then break in while she was gone. (How jaded is that? LOL) Cute story.This actually happened to me once with a wrong number, but he turned out to be icky (not the breaking in part). :0) Congratulations on a well-deserved win. LG~
ROFL - This is too cute! Love it. Very well-written, too!

Congratulations on placing 2nd!