The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/07
With such a word limit I really liked how you captured their first meetings, especially when she needed the tea but he only made a cup for himself! Good character development and sweet story. My only slight suggestion is to offer spaces between paragraphs for smoother reading. Good job!
04/30/07
"Was it romantic – not particularly" Great line, yet is was a romance that lasts. Enjoyed the style in which you wrote this story!
05/01/07
Love comes in unexpected places. This was a nice read, but would have been easier to read with spaces between the paragraphs. I liked how he came back two weeks later to propose. Blessings, Cheri
There's a very good story tucked in here. I would have like to read a little dialogue instead of story "telling". But the plot is very good.