The Official Writing Challenge
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This was sweet, such creativity! I loved when she was getting ready and felt like the adults should stuff an apple in her mouth and serve her. Great writing!
I thought this was just adorable. I love how you brought the two together on the roof.
Good one! Creative, unique and satisfying.
An interesting story and very nicely written. I loved the description of the boy—“Skinny and statue-still, with bony knees drawn up beneath his chin. A dark curl spirals down to brush his nose, which looks long and sensitive like the ones on Greek statues at the art museum.” I really liked the last line of the story, too!