The Official Writing Challenge
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As wives, how many times have we wished to rid ourselves of a trait from our husbands we don't prefer. But it is just that quality that has made them our perfect match in the eyes of God.
04/30/07
You have given depth to this "suitable" story of love!
04/30/07
How I love your fascinating glimpses into Chinese culture! This is a fantastic love story, and I felt as if I knew your protagonist very well by its end.
I enjoyed seeing the customs of another country, and I loved that they truly fell in love. Great job.
04/30/07
'Ugh! The sentimentality was almost enough to make me puke.' Oh how typical Suz! I loved it! And it's so much more wonderful to know it was true.

I think I would feel the same though (which you portrayed so well) being surrounded by so much ... mush! Panda bear? Pleck! ;)