The Official Writing Challenge
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As wives, how many times have we wished to rid ourselves of a trait from our husbands we don't prefer. But it is just that quality that has made them our perfect match in the eyes of God.
You have given depth to this "suitable" story of love!
How I love your fascinating glimpses into Chinese culture! This is a fantastic love story, and I felt as if I knew your protagonist very well by its end.
I enjoyed seeing the customs of another country, and I loved that they truly fell in love. Great job.
'Ugh! The sentimentality was almost enough to make me puke.' Oh how typical Suz! I loved it! And it's so much more wonderful to know it was true.

I think I would feel the same though (which you portrayed so well) being surrounded by so much ... mush! Panda bear? Pleck! ;)