The Official Writing Challenge
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What I like most about this is how the whole story is one simple scene, in one room with one goal - to get ready for dinner. I think the narrative flowed incredibly well and that you made the right choice in having it be all you needed.

There are quite a few entries this week dealing with Alzheimer's, but in this particular story I could imagine this was my grandfather. This could be him, this morning, knowing that in the near future his world of memories will come crashing down. You did an excellent job conveying this. Good luck!
05/01/07
Your title was perfect--so appropriate to your touching love story! I am always so impressed with accounts of long, loving, faithful, committed marriages, and I really enjoyed reading this! :)
05/01/07
Definitely, in the right level...Masters. Superb from the title to the ending!