The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/07
Well done - I did get a bit of a surprise when I realised what the characters really were! I had been thinking that the dialogue seemed a little unnatural in normal conversation - Now I see why!
04/28/07
How creative is this! The name Drake should have clued me in...Very well done, and such a great lesson. Great job!
04/29/07
I was thinking D & D were ancient peoples. Nice twist. Good job with the dialect. :)
04/29/07
Nicely done & VERY creative!
05/01/07
Clever twist!
Cute twist here. You took me in.