The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
A touching and beautiful love story! In God's timing and His design, a great message to be taken to heart.
04/26/07
What a lovely story! , Even though you are working from a different cultural standpoint, there is an excellent lesson here about the importance of trusting God to put all the pieces of a relationship together. Good work.
04/27/07
Wow! The title caught my attention and drew me into the piece. I'm so glad there are other South Asian Christian writers out there, especially one who has a talent for weaving God and culture into a wonderful story.
Very lovely story. I felt it had a bit more telling than showing, and I didn't get sucked into the emotions quite as much as I wished, but otherwise great job.
04/30/07
I SO wanted to write something like this...but you did a great job! I love the hindi phrases and the names especially. You did a good job of weaving in and out of a different but very beautiful culture. I wished there had been a little more (can you tell I really enjoyed this?) though you brought it to a satisfying ending. Can't think of anything to improve. ^_^
05/02/07
The title made me curious, and I was so glad I read it. What a beautiful story. I loved Karam's trust in the Lord. Excellent!