The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/07
This was well written, and held my attention the whole way through. I liked your narrator's naive voice, though found her boyfriend's change in heart and character a little hard to believe at the end.
04/29/07
Oh you got me! What a twist. I've got to read it again now, knowing the end. Fabulous! :)
04/29/07
Hee hee. So good the second time. This one's going in my faves.
05/01/07
Man's best friend triumphs! Creative take on the theme. You did well on the doggie emotions. Good job.