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04/26/07
This piece has all the elements I love - humor and romance without being completely unrealistic.
04/27/07
Oh well done! This was very funny, and excellently crafted.
04/28/07
A funny, on the edge, boy meets girl. This is a great line: "I tried and it just whimpered and put its sleeves over its ears."
Nice! :)
04/29/07
Cute title and characters. I loved his response to the shout it out as well. This was well written and I enjoyed reading it!
05/01/07
Some great lines, good humour and a unique approach to the theme. Good work.
05/01/07
Cute! And funny. I also loved the line with the shirt and Shout. Nice touch to pick this setting, I think it fits the topic pretty good.