The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/07
This was very well written. I liked the conclusion.
04/29/07
This was very well written! I thought at the beginning Ellen would be hard to like as she seemed headed for trouble by her own choices but you made her likable, and handled the choices delicately. Well done.
Life is what happens while we're making plans. The best laid plans fail when confronted with a bigger dream. This is a good story.
05/01/07
Great ending paragraph! "Dream a Little Dream" indeed!