The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like this story. Really fun to read the Jamaican dialogue. Kudos to you!
04/27/07
Well done - very unique. This story had a clear message. Man looks on the outward appearance, but God looks into the heart. (I think that's my interpretation of a verse in 2 Samuel!).
This story is well written and with a very thought provoking message. The dialogue was great. I could "hear" it. The title drew me in--nice play on a current song.
04/29/07
How I loved this! I thought the dialogue was amazing and the message excellent. Great writing here!
05/01/07
Great job with the dialect, and with creating realistic, believable characters.
05/01/07
Prejudice is hard to kill - even amongst those who call themselves christians. Great lesson, well done.
Very tastefully done. Good article.