The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! The line that blessed my socks off was, 'I am drenched with love and ready to obey.' Loved the intimacy between the Heavenly Father & the writer.
04/25/05
How very gifted you are. And the tenderness and thankfulness you express is beautiful. I loved the way you described the birds calling out to their reflections in the water as though they were leaving them behind. You wrote with a heart filled with thanksgiving. Blessed.
04/25/05
Wow. Simply beautiful. Your writing touched my soul and made me also want to sing praises of thanks to our wonderful Creator.
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings, Lynda
04/26/05
Moments like you've shared in your special place are wonderful and you have bought us into that place so quickly and related your time of invigorating worship so well that I feel that I am there.
04/26/05
Excellent. I love moments like these on the beach as well.
04/27/05
Very nicely done. It gives such a sense of peace.
04/28/05
This is beautiful! You made me home sick for some time on the beach alone with God. Beautifully written!
05/01/05
Ah yes Miss. Scarlet, I loved this. Very peaceful and grateful peace/piece.