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04/26/07
Ah, a comforting tale of real, everyday love. Sounds like it's right out of 1Corinthians 13. This man is truly a hero. This is a down to earth tale that feels as natural and comfortable as an old shoe! Good job!
04/26/07
Nice.
I like the way you told your story, nothing fancy or complicated, just out there.
Real romance--real story. Good job!
I love truth, and this story speaks to my heart about the truth of real love! Bravo!!!
05/01/07
This is definitely a "MASTERS" piece. I loved the down-to-earth tone and especially your opening sentence. In my opinion, any guy that would do all of that for his wife, is more than just 'romantic'. Great piece. ^_^
05/02/07
This is romance in the real world. I loved it! Great work here
05/02/07
I'd missed this one while making my rounds! I love how this piece exposes the shallowness of the Cinderella fantasy and makes us realize what true love and acceptance really are all about. I'm glad you wrote it! ;o) Cheri
05/05/07
This is ... perfect.