The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
You capture the trapped feeling of your MC very well. Some of your dialogue, I felt, could use some brushing up, but it was still good. Kudos.
04/28/07
Loved the part about the eagles especially - their free fall through the skies; and all in all, a great story of love and romance.
What a beautiful story! I love how you brought light to what the soldiers face in their personal lives when their country calls them to serve in foreign lands. I really loved your story!
04/29/07
That first line packed quite a punch and the writing stayed strong all the way through. Very well done.
Another good romance. The judges has a hard time this week, I'm sure. Good writing.
05/11/07
Wonderful writing! I was stationed at Ft. Carson, once, so this was fun for me to read, as if turning back time.

A romance story doesn't get much better than this. I'm glad I came calling to thank you for your comment on my Sparrow story. I appreciate your writing in both places!