The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
The descriptions and dialogue in this just shine. I loved the part about how he had the already dead mentality on the fork, flew and landed softly. I could totally see the whole thing, and loved it!
04/19/07
Great characters. This was a fun read.
04/19/07
Oh My!!!
I grinned, smiled and laughed all the way through. Great writing too and so creative.
This could easily be illustrated, you're descriptions are so crisp and right-on, the artist would know exactly what to draw.
Superb job. I'm very glad I read this. I needed it. God bless.
I'd love to see this with pictures also. It would make a delightful animated cartoon.
04/22/07
Wonderful characterization. You have a true gift here. Great writing.
04/23/07
Sammy is so funny! I really enjoyed reading this, it's a great end to a long day.
04/24/07
A fun story. Hard to write from a critters POV but you nailed it. Loved how the possum outwitted the people. yeggy
Great story. I enjoyed it immensely.
Cute tale of a possum playing possum. I was a little confused at first as to the animal identity of each (name) speaker. Maybe if I knew more about animals it would have helped. However, the story was funny and I did get the message.