The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/07
Oh dear, guess I'd be a foreigner, too. Great POV choice. Consistent voice. Strong sence of place. Had me smiling, sepecially at the end.
04/20/07
Very creative and nicely written. Good POV!
04/23/07
I definitely enjoyed the voice of this. A neat perspective on what we think is "normal."
04/24/07
Enjoyed the POV you used to tell this creative and humorous story.
04/24/07
I loved the part about the bathroom containig four cement squating blocks where people come to relax and your one word expressions, like "weird plus!" Thanks for the chuckles - I needed them! Blessings, Jo