The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
This is a girl with spunk, I would have backed out as soon as they started digging the latrine! I loved the inner thoughts, the dialogue, and the flow of the story. Well done!
04/19/07
Great job discribing the reality of a wonderful place. I think the boys should have had to sleep under the canoes. I loved the too many clothes and make-up on a trip the Boundary Waters. What a hoot!
04/23/07
I smiled throughout this delightful little story, but laughed aloud when I came to the part about "mosquitos as large as hummingbirds!" I enjoyed the trip - from sinking tent to indigestable supper to the private walk...and You want to go again?? Personally, I pass!
Great story, written well!
Sounds like a fun (funny) vacation. I'm not sure I would have said "yes" to next year! Good writing here.