The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 917 times
Member Comments
Oh my........ Did you "hit" us all between the eyes with this story or what? This really should be done as a "DRAMATIC DIALOGUE" before a packed house. There would be so much repenting going on that Heaven wouldn't know what to do. You have a HUGE gift with your pen or word processor. Loved your story immensely!
Powerful message! What's better? To thank God for curing your cancer or to thank God that you do not have cancer. As your story reminds us, we take too much for granted. Thank you for reminding me of all the things I have to be thankful for.
Yep, got my toes stepped on a bit! LOL. Thanks for the reminder of how much we take for granted!
Great job!
Blessings, Lynda
Loved the way you drew me in. What did the pastor want... It's good to be reminded that every breath is a blessing! One iddy biddy word on technique. Statements like: I answered. I agreed and I’d retorted are redundant because they're built into the sense of the dialogue.
Very good. It's so easy to be lulled into complacency ... we tend to overlook our blessings!
Karen, I'm seeing your name a lot in the winner's circle. Congrats. This story is an excellent reason why you are doing so well.