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04/19/07
Very cute story. I can just hear their sweet little conversation. Kids provide the best humour, don't they? Great job!
04/19/07
ROFL, this is precious. Gotta love those grandkids!
It sounds like these two keep you in stitches quite often. I'm still laughing! "Did I eat Him." Too cute!
04/20/07
This was so funny in parts I almost shot a bunny, ha ha. This was precious, and a great last line.
04/21/07
I really liked the ending.
Don't you just love the things kids say? :-) I enjoyed reading this.
04/23/07
Out of the mouths of babes, eh? And Jan, you don't give yourself enough credit. I enjoyed the lighthearted tone of this, and your ear for humor. Great stuff!
04/23/07
Just precious--no other word for it!

In the second paragraph: "...Ron and me..."

You did a marvelous job of inviting the reader to join in on this car trip and the kiddos' conversation.
04/24/07
Precious memories. An amusing tale, well told and with love. Yeggy
This was a precious story. I loved it from start to finish.
04/25/07
So cute! Gotta love the way kids talk about God. And "Shoot the bunny" - TOO funny!