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Very cute story. I can just hear their sweet little conversation. Kids provide the best humour, don't they? Great job!
ROFL, this is precious. Gotta love those grandkids!
It sounds like these two keep you in stitches quite often. I'm still laughing! "Did I eat Him." Too cute!
This was so funny in parts I almost shot a bunny, ha ha. This was precious, and a great last line.
I really liked the ending.
Don't you just love the things kids say? :-) I enjoyed reading this.
Out of the mouths of babes, eh? And Jan, you don't give yourself enough credit. I enjoyed the lighthearted tone of this, and your ear for humor. Great stuff!
Just precious--no other word for it!

In the second paragraph: "...Ron and me..."

You did a marvelous job of inviting the reader to join in on this car trip and the kiddos' conversation.
Precious memories. An amusing tale, well told and with love. Yeggy
This was a precious story. I loved it from start to finish.
So cute! Gotta love the way kids talk about God. And "Shoot the bunny" - TOO funny!