The Official Writing Challenge
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Walter is a gem. I thought it was an exceptionally strong start, but the middle for me lost some of the punch I so loved in the beginning. I still enjoyed it very much!
I really enjoyed Walter, especially asking the pastor if he was new. The Tom Swifties got a little distracting from the story -- perhaps a few would have been enough. I really enjoyed the application on the verse to Walter's life. Good job.