The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute! Was it true? I just returned from my first cruise and can relate to much of it but Port Canaveral is much easier to get in and out of:) Nice story!
I went on one with the same stop and our Cozmuel experience was very nearly the same. I loved the end with the little voice in the backseat. Well done, flowed great!
I liked your description of your room best, as well as the concluding sentence.
What an adventure. I've never been on a cruise, but I could picture it all because of your excellent writing.
I think I'll skip Cozumel! Good job on the writing, though.
Ah, yes, the "joys" of cruising. You've told the story well, but decreasing the number exclamation points would make it better - I was i bit distracted by them. I enjoyed your entry, you made me giggle.
Good account of a cruise. Funny now. Probably not while it was happening. Although there have been times when I found humor even during a crisis. Good writing.