The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
Very cute! Was it true? I just returned from my first cruise and can relate to much of it but Port Canaveral is much easier to get in and out of:) Nice story!
04/19/07
I went on one with the same stop and our Cozmuel experience was very nearly the same. I loved the end with the little voice in the backseat. Well done, flowed great!
I liked your description of your room best, as well as the concluding sentence.
04/21/07
What an adventure. I've never been on a cruise, but I could picture it all because of your excellent writing.
04/22/07
I think I'll skip Cozumel! Good job on the writing, though.
04/24/07
Ah, yes, the "joys" of cruising. You've told the story well, but decreasing the number exclamation points would make it better - I was i bit distracted by them. I enjoyed your entry, you made me giggle.
Good account of a cruise. Funny now. Probably not while it was happening. Although there have been times when I found humor even during a crisis. Good writing.