The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/07
This is a sweet story. I espcially loved the line about when I'm out of college I'll go to kindergarten. I think a little more dialogue would be great, but it was a good story just the same.
This sounds like a true story. I wondered if it is. I, too, liked best the going from college to kindergarten line.
The title fits this well. Good writing. I would like to have seen a little more conversation throughout the article, but all in all very fun read.