The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
Short, but good. With a few more interactions between straight man and comedian, this could be a very funny anecdote.
04/20/07
I have done that over and over! I loved the inner dialogue because I've said the very same things wondering what is HIS problem when it's been mine. This was cute, I liked it a lot!
This is a perfect husband/wife moment where you he's not seeing what she's seeing. I love it1
04/21/07
Ha ha! I can relate. Short, funny and apt. Good job.
04/23/07
So funny and so true to life!