The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/07
The humor in this article is the images that come into the reader's mind. You have very nicely painted several for us.

I especially liked the image of kitty sliding uncontrolled across the side table, wiping everything out as he/she goes and dangling inches from a maliciously delighted doggie grin.

Our own lives give us way too much material for humor, don't they? Good job!
04/20/07
Although it takes me time, sometimes the so not funny at the time turns out pretty funny after the fact. You captured that well. Well done!
04/20/07
LOL! Too funny! I love the teddy-bear printed pj's and what a jazzy name for a dog! My fave line was "vanity wounded and throbbing" for some reason that's just so vivid...nice piece!
04/21/07
True - it's all around us and we can't see it, especially when it is at our own expense. Enjoyed this. Good work.
04/21/07
So natural...so funny! Wondering what to write about humour, and then life characteristically supplies the material. Good job.
Really funny! The details make this an excellent article.
I love how you wrote your piece within the framework of "What shall I write?" Clever!
04/22/07
Your telling makes this a delightful and funny story! Great writing!
Good take on humor. Been there, done that. Not exactly the same--it was 5 a.m.!
04/25/07
Chaz ten writer one. At least you got a good story out of it.