The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful, heart-warming story! You expressed beautifully how "THANKFUL" we all should be for life. All life is precious! I'm thankful you wrote this story! Very touching.
04/25/05
Very creative! I thought at first that the baby had already been born but you surprised me about half way through. Great writing - unique take on "Thanksgiving."
Blessings, Lynda
04/25/05
Creative story. Great reminder that even before we were born we were 'on His mind'. Unique take on being in the womb from the babies point of view.
04/26/05
What a clever perspective. Interesting reading!
05/01/05
Gorgeous!
05/03/05
Very sweet story Cheri, and a beautiful reminder of the blessings of obedience.