The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this. Not a whodunit per se, but did he make the choice, which to me is just as good. This has a great message and boy did I feel suspense. Good job!
What a great analogy you created. I loved it.
I think I know where this is going, but I feel like I haven't gotten there. I assume this is a freedom in Christ, but it is unclear. The writing is good however.