The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
I can almost hear the film noir music playing in the background...fun poem!
04/12/07
Well done. The message is great and presented with wonderful style.
04/12/07
Thank you. Good.
04/13/07
Excellent. Full of insight and wisdom and good teaching.
04/13/07
Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous! A couple of typos, but nothing distracing. Great job on this entry!
Wow. I wish you could teach me how to right like that.
04/13/07
This is a nice read at the end of a very long week. Nice ryhme and flow and especially a good story and message interwoven.
I really love this--what a great message in a wonderful poem. A "master"ful poem for sure!
How do you do it? Such a long poem, but right on target. I would run out of thought and words.
04/17/07
Superb skill, and nothing short of brilliant. I hope you encounter readers who can recognize the caliber of your talent. I salute you, sincerely.
04/19/07
Kenn - fun story. I stumbled on the meter at times, which is due to my own non-rhythmic limitations. Very enjoyable.