The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
Cute title, and very realistic writing of a young child's thoughts and words. Sweet story!
04/13/07
Very cute story. Delightful voice!
Adorable! A perfect children's mystery with realistic characters and behavior. Excellent work and a great title too.
04/13/07
This an adorable story! I love the inner dialouge and espeically dear Gracie. She's a miniature sherlock in the making. Especially like the bit with the story from the woman and the missing coin. ^_^
I loved the story--best of all--the child's faith.
04/17/07
Whining will get you in the naughty spot. Don't I know it! God doesn't like whiners. I loved that line.

You did a beautiful job of capturing the innocence and not-so-innocence of childhood with this 'mystery' of Gracie Jane's. Nice work.

Blessings, Cheri
Cute! And you even brought Jesus into this crime solving.
04/17/07
Precious, delightful and an all around great story!
04/18/07
What an absolutely wonderful job of characterization on Gracie Jane. This story was absolutely delightful.
04/18/07
What a wonderful job of writing from a little girl's POV! I like the part about the "angry monster" - I'm familiar with it too. :)
04/18/07
The Finder-Outer, that is classic. This was a fun read and very well done. I could see this as a pre Nancy Drew series for a younger set, like my sleuthing kids!