The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
I not sure if I have my "detectives" right, but this sounds like Sam Spade, the pastor. Very neat way of dealing with the theme and working in the Gospel. The voice was great — I could see the 40's. Good job.
04/12/07
I really enjoyed reading this one. Great voice!
04/13/07
I absolutely loved this! How creative, imaginative, and captivating! :) I'm a big fan of old 40's-era detective dramas from radio and movies, and you have captured the mood, the setting, and the dialogue perfectly! Excellent job!!!!! :)
04/13/07
It had occurred to me to use a Sam Spade character, but now I'm glad I didn't. You did it so well! Good job.
Good mystery with a great underlying message.
04/13/07
Great voice! Nice conversation and good wrap up at the end!!
04/13/07
Very good! Love the twist on this. The title fits just right and I like the tone of the good ol' detective-er, ahem-pastor. Good mystery!
I figured out Who was following her, but not who the "detective" was. A great old-fashioned detective story with a twist!
Surprise ending. Good job.
Ooo, I loved the mood and tone of this and totally didn't see the ending coming. Good job!
04/18/07
You did an awesome job of capturing the mood and era of this - and SO creative twist at the end! Love how you worked the gospel in. Excellent.
04/19/07
Congrats on your well-deserved EC!!
Congratulations on your win! Well deserved.
I loved the voice, style and characterizations.
Good job, I say!