The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
100 more words would've filled in a few blanks for me. Well-written - just not quite enough.
04/13/07
More please! I really wanna know what happened. This definitely has potential for being a great mystery story!
So Mother did it, but how did she get him to overdose??
This was great, but I, too, needed to know more.
04/16/07
Oooooooooooooh, what a suspenseful build up to the revelation of a possible murderer, but I'm "dying" to know more! :)
This is well written. The discriptions are good, but I was a little confused at the ending. It seemed like something, some detail, was missing.