The Official Writing Challenge
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I think this was well-written. Good emotions, great ending!
Very nicely done. I love how the title fits in with the last line.

Great description and dialogue.

Wonderful story.
This is a beautiful story, and I really love the unity and significance that you brought to the story through that word, MORE.
I really like this! It leaves me with a warm feeling inside. Maybe one day, you'll use these characters in a novel that will let us know "more" about how God continued to move in their lives... Blessings, Cheri
Well done. I agree about the ending and how it reflects the title.Yes, would make a wonderful expanded story.
I'm glad Jack didn't turn out to be some wacko stalker. ^_^ This was very nice, I liked the character of Julia and her realistic reactions to the sudden wrench thrown into her wheel of life. Nice job.
Wonderful story. Well done.
I loved this mystery story of hope. It was very well done.
This stirred my emotions. Powerful writing and full of hope! It hit home with me. All things are possible with God.
Wonderful account of lives that have changed.