The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
I think this was well-written. Good emotions, great ending!
Very nicely done. I love how the title fits in with the last line.

Great description and dialogue.

Wonderful story.
This is a beautiful story, and I really love the unity and significance that you brought to the story through that word, MORE.
04/12/07
I really like this! It leaves me with a warm feeling inside. Maybe one day, you'll use these characters in a novel that will let us know "more" about how God continued to move in their lives... Blessings, Cheri
04/13/07
Well done. I agree about the ending and how it reflects the title.Yes, would make a wonderful expanded story.
04/13/07
I'm glad Jack didn't turn out to be some wacko stalker. ^_^ This was very nice, I liked the character of Julia and her realistic reactions to the sudden wrench thrown into her wheel of life. Nice job.
Wonderful story. Well done.
I loved this mystery story of hope. It was very well done.
04/15/07
This stirred my emotions. Powerful writing and full of hope! It hit home with me. All things are possible with God.
Wonderful account of lives that have changed.