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04/13/07
Interesting concept, but a more dramatic opening would catch the reader's attention better. I kept wanting to know more detail about the murder that had been committed in front of a television audience, no less! The alleged murderer's identity was certainly a surprise, but I would have liked to know more about the case!
04/14/07
Oh this is a thriller I could see on the big screen! Great ending.
What a surprise ending! Had it been real, I probably would have fainted. I would really liked to have known what the charge was early on in the story. It would have created a little more "picture". But a good story on the whole.
04/17/07
Pretty good! I too, wanted to know more about this intriguing affair!