Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Four Ways For A Christian Writer To Win A Publishing Package HERE



The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Write in the MYSTERY genre (04/05/07)

TITLE: Missing Miss Mittens
By Dixie Phillips
04/10/07


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

The Sompolinsky family took up a whole city block.
And in every room hung an antique cuckoo clock.

There were aunts and uncles and cousins galore.
Keeping track of each one was an impossible chore.

One day Papa Sompolinsky gave his head a scratch,
“Mama,” he said, “Do my socks match?”

“No dear,” Mama laughed, “How colorblind are you?
One sock is green and the other sock’s blue.”

After Papa got dressed, he headed for the door,
Tripping over the toys scattered on the floor.

All twelve of the children stood in a row,
From tallest to shortest and toe-to-toe.

“Goodbye, Papa!” his children all said,
As he stooped and planted a kiss on each head.

“Hurry!” said Papa, “I don’t want to be late.
Why…. Look… It’s already half-past eight.”

As Papa headed off in a mad dash to work,
He heard a noise and turned with a jerk.

There at the back of the van sat their cat.
Licking her paws and looking quite fat.

“Oh, no!” muttered Papa, “This just cannot be.
That cat should be home, not in here with me.”

“Shoo cat! You just cannot stay.
Off with you now, go home right away!”

Meanwhile at home the children were calling.
“Miss Mittens is lost!” they all started bawling.

“Here kitty, kitty, come drink some cream.
You know how you like to lick the bowl clean.”

But precious Miss Mittens never appeared,
For her safe return they greatly feared.

Mama then called, “It’s time for bed.”
The children marched slowly hanging their heads.

As Mama tucked each child in bed with care,
They folded their hands and whispered a prayer.

“Dear God, be with Miss Mittens tonight.
And please bring her home by the morning light.”

When Papa’s factory shift was all done,
He drove in his van toward the rising sun.

All of a sudden his heart skipped a beat.
There lay Miss Mittens on the side of the street.

Looking quite lifeless and squished really flat,
A tear filled his eye when he scooped up their cat.

He hurried home before his children did wake.
And to the backyard took a shovel and rake.

He buried Miss Mittens out under the tree,
Hoping that none of his children would see.

At breakfast that morning while Mama was cooking,
All twelve of the children were outside and looking.

“Papa,” they asked, “have you seen our cat?”
He replied with a moan, “I know where she’s at.”

And to their backyard, they all took a walk.
Papa stammered and stuttered when he started to talk.

“I just want to say, I knew it was her.
No other cat has her gray-colored fur.”

For three days and nights fresh flowers were carried,
To the backyard where Miss Mittens was buried.

Then one afternoon as the children stood playing.
They could not believe what their Mama was saying.

“Miss Mittens is back! How can this be?
She’s in the backyard, out under the tree!”

Papa opened the window and gave out a shout,
“Tell me what is all the commotion’s about?”
He couldn’t believe what his tired eyes saw.
There sat Miss Mittens licking her paw.

Papa declared, “Why, merciful me!
If Miss Mittens is here, who’s under the tree?”

Glaring at Papa, Mama frowned and said,
“Miss Mittens is alive, some other cat is dead.”

“A cat cemetery is all that we need,
With all these hungry children to feed.”

First, came a giggle and then a tee hee,
Laughter consumed the whole family.

“It’s Papa’s eyes!” Mama said with a grin
They have caused all this trouble we’re in.”

“Brown is black and blue is green.
He’s buried a cat that we’ve never seen.”

They laughed and laughed until they all cried.
They never forgot the day Miss Mittens died.

That night as Papa to work drove away.
At the back of van purred a gray stowaway.

This silly, true story is part of their history.
The cat under the tree still remains a mystery.


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
Accept Jesus as Your Lord and Savior Right Now - CLICK HERE
JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 1265 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Sara Harricharan 04/12/07
This is quite a mystery! That poor cat...heehee. Very well done, you kept me reading all the way through with the touch of humor and to see what happened to Miss Mittens.
Anita Neuman04/12/07
Very cute! A bit inconsistent with the meter, but still a very delightful and creative read.
Linda Germain 04/13/07
Very cute! Wonder how many of us have taken the cat on a ride without knowing? (I nearly had a heart attack when mine nonchalantly crawled over the seat while I was on my way to an appointment).
Joanne Sher 04/16/07
So cute and delightful! Gave me a laugh, too!
Jacquelyn Horne04/17/07
Wonderful account of a mysterious cat. I enjoyed this poem.