The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
Brilliant job! Mystified this reader all the way to the ("I assume") nearest bathtub. Enjoyed the search, the suspense and the mystery story! Kudos!
04/13/07
Fun title! Great suspense. Nicely done.
04/13/07
I have two of my own and I worry about them all the time, too! You'd think they were kids - well, actually, THEY think they ARE the kids and that they run the show. I was with you all the way through this. Good work.
04/14/07
Spellbinding! I enjoyed it.
A cute story told very well! (I could almost smell the cat.)
Neat story, well told. I loved your descriptions and worried with you about finding Dexter.
Good writing here. Liked the husband's nonchalance and the humorous/rebellious attitude of the cat lover.
04/17/07
This was fun! And cute! I've gone looking for my own two cats more than once in all hours and kinds of weather! I love the lines in there, especially the one with the frog and prince at home. That was so funny, I laughed all the way to the end. You brought the mystery to a satisfying end with a logical explanation to Dexter's whereabouts. Great writing! ^_^
04/17/07
This was great from title to finish. Well done!!!!
04/18/07
Mastercrafted! Enjoyed the read!
What I truly enjoyed about this entry is how I (as a reader) could so easily identify with what was going on. Good job!
04/18/07
Very well done! I loved the toad distraction; it broke the tension you built up. So true to life. I enjoyed this piece. I only wonder, who picked up the trash? This from the side of the person whose trash gets rifled through by the neighbor's dog every so often. Blessings, Cheri
04/18/07
Just delightful and suspenseful. I just LOVED the whole toad thing. Gave me a good giggle! You definitely kept me intrigued until the end!