The Official Writing Challenge
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Juliet Melrose's "JM" stood for Just Married? Really, now!! Anyway, fine job, kept my attention and with the exception of a missing "ed" on need (??) ZZZ's. This was a super sleuth story! Excellent!
Wonderful. You had me reading to the very end. Loved it.
Very clever whodunit! The characterization of Mrs. Melrose was excellent, and I loved the surprise ending! (I did notice you used "weather" for "whether," though!) I really enjoyed this well written story! :)
Cute, quick mystery.
I enjoyed reading this. Good writing and nice descriptive phrases. I could really see the scene.
Too fun! I loved this PI, quirkly and somewhat sarcastic, he fit the bill just perfect to be the one ferreting out the missing painting! I like the ending where 'no one' actually did anything. Excellent come together with the family and the restaurant. ^_^
How fun was this?? I loved it, strong start, the JM was priceless, and the ending, who would have thought? Excellent!!